Running Record on Student

Here is the running record:
https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B-8l5rhQSbMIM2FKWEFsR0tJZTQ/view?usp=sharing

I did the running record on a little girl named Ayala. Ayala is in second grade, and read the book Romona Quimby to me. She read almost every work perfectly, with the Error Rate 1:108, Accuracy Rate 99%, and Self-Correction Rate 0:1.
Ayala retold the story nicely.
So what help does she need already? Ayala may read the words nicely, but she didn't read the story nicely. The sentences ran into each other and she did not always use punctuation correctly.


Here is the mini-lesson plan on punctuation I made to help Ayala.
https://www.smore.com/v248j